tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2202829706330419533.post7079103083413009033..comments2015-06-08T22:53:49.109+08:00Comments on 5G All-Stars: Week in Review (English) 19 10 09Year 6 With Mr. Lowehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09372940351875918151noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2202829706330419533.post-66253985533750256462009-11-24T22:33:43.613+08:002009-11-24T22:33:43.613+08:00I enjoyed in litracy writing a biography about Way...I enjoyed in litracy writing a biography about Wayne Gretskey and my DadAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2202829706330419533.post-16237995243244616722009-11-24T19:01:34.597+08:002009-11-24T19:01:34.597+08:00I think it is a good idea to put the , information...I think it is a good idea to put the , information that we use in , biographies . Also because when people , visit the website they can revise, what do we use in biographies, also us .Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2202829706330419533.post-61350952752940757372009-11-23T23:05:57.932+08:002009-11-23T23:05:57.932+08:00I think you did a good job because you included ex...I think you did a good job because you included examples of what you need to take notes on you described everything well, and the spelling is correct. But to improve I think on both paragraphs you could have wrote down who you did and if you think that the person you did was pacific and gave you lots of information. Also, for the first paragraph you could have written down if you think that you did good on the assessment and why.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com