03 March, 2014

Acrostic Poem "Portal" by Daniel

Portal

Past and present
Original
Ricochet between time
Teleportation
After Earth
Lost in time

Image Credit: Soongpa


10 comments:

  1. Anonymous4/3/14 16:51

    Hi Daniel,

    I think that your acrostic poem was great because you used some interesting words to describe portal. I wish i can do one like you to.

    Was it hard for thinking a poem like that.

    Aryana

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    1. Anonymous11/3/14 13:30

      Hi Aryana,
      Yes it was really hard thinking of the really hard words like "Ricochet"
      How Do you like my words?

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    2. Anonymous11/3/14 13:34

      Hi Aryana,
      Yes it was really hard thinking of the really hard words like "Ricochet"
      How Do you like my words?

      Delete
  2. Anonymous6/3/14 10:12

    i like my acrostic poem

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  3. Anonymous6/3/14 10:23

    Hi Daniel,

    We really like your acrostic poem because you really described well the features of a portal and what it looks like. But if you could write an acrostic poem on diamonds what would it be?

    Doga & Iris

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  4. Anonymous7/3/14 09:41

    Hi Iris and Aryana,
    if i wrote an acrostic poem about diamonds it would look like this, do you like it?

    Dark Blue
    Iinvincable
    Arctic colour
    Mighty strong
    Oblivious
    Negative
    Differents
    Static

    Thank you,
    Iris & Aryana

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  5. Anonymous7/3/14 09:43

    Hi Dainel,

    I like your acrostic poem , l think it is about the minecraft in the minecraft it also has a portal . You also can write about gold , iron something like that.

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    1. Anonymous11/3/14 13:33

      Hi Anonymous,
      I would like to know who you are so i could reply to your comment by at the end of you comment put [Your name] at the end

      Delete
  6. Anonymous11/3/14 21:31

    Nice descripton! I like the poem!

    from aman

    (atwood)

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  7. Anonymous28/4/14 10:15

    Hey Daniel,
    This is a great poem. It describes a portal very well and the picture is amazing.
    Good job Daniel!

    Hannah

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