Dear Doga, I think this is a great personification poem but it is too easy, everyone could guess that its a cat. But nobody can think of a great personification poem (not saying its not great because it is) if you made one about a carpet what would it say? Daniel & Lucy
Dear Doga, Iris and Aryana, Why would it say Flap Flap Flap because in my vocabulary list it doesn't say Cflap Aflap Rflap Pflap Eflap Tflap but its should be: Collectable Arcane colours Rocking the house Plated gold Endurance Tight
Hi Doga Your poem is awesome. As Daniel said it is too easy.You can make it better by using more interesting words and write some more lines.If you could make a poem on bees what would it look like? Thanks for writing this post. James V.
Hi Doga I like your poem. Every thing you said in the poem is true I know becouse I havea cat. But I know cat do more then what you have written in your poen. For example: I can balance on any fence, I can jump higher then your fridge or this I use my tongue to drink water. But I'm not saying it's bad its good I'm just trying to give edvice for your poem. Adriel.R
I really like what you did there I really like cats i had about 9 in Bali Good job but you might have used I a little too much, do you have a cat and whats its name?
Dear Doga,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a great personification poem but it is too easy, everyone could guess that its a cat. But nobody can think of a great personification poem (not saying its not great because it is) if you made one about a carpet what would it say?
Daniel & Lucy
Hi, Daniel and Lucy
DeleteIt would say flap flap flap
From Doga&Iris&Aryana
Dear Doga, Iris and Aryana,
DeleteWhy would it say Flap Flap Flap because in my vocabulary list it doesn't say
Cflap
Aflap
Rflap
Pflap
Eflap
Tflap
but its should be:
Collectable
Arcane colours
Rocking the house
Plated gold
Endurance
Tight
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DeleteHi Doga
ReplyDeleteYour poem is awesome. As Daniel said it is too easy.You can make it better by using
more interesting words and write some more lines.If you could make a poem on bees what would it look like?
Thanks for writing this post.
James V.
Hi JamesV
DeleteI would write... I am yellow and black I have a stinging back I have wings to fly I suck my honey from flowers. My name is :Buzz
From doga&Iris&Aryana
Hi Doga
ReplyDeleteI like your poem. Every thing you said in the poem is true I know becouse I havea cat. But I know cat do more then what you have written in your poen. For example: I can balance on any fence, I can jump higher then your fridge or this I use my tongue to drink water. But I'm not saying it's bad its good I'm just trying to give edvice for your poem.
Adriel.R
I like this Poem alot as Daniel and James V said it is a bit easy.
ReplyDeleteInstead of Nap you could of done sleep?
Good Job!
Daisy
I really like what you did there I really like cats i had about 9 in Bali Good job but you might have used I a little too much, do you have a cat and whats its name?
ReplyDeleteAlex
Dear Doga,
ReplyDeleteNice poem.
Sincerely, Ert