25 February, 2014

Personification Poem by Doga

I scratch when I'm angry
I purr when I sleep.
I land on 4 feet.
I cough up hair balls.
I love to nap.

My name is Meaw











Image Credit: Wikimedia Commons

10 comments:

  1. Dear Doga,
    I think this is a great personification poem but it is too easy, everyone could guess that its a cat. But nobody can think of a great personification poem (not saying its not great because it is) if you made one about a carpet what would it say?
    Daniel & Lucy

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    1. Anonymous28/2/14 14:18

      Hi, Daniel and Lucy
      It would say flap flap flap

      From Doga&Iris&Aryana

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    2. Anonymous11/3/14 13:40

      Dear Doga, Iris and Aryana,
      Why would it say Flap Flap Flap because in my vocabulary list it doesn't say
      Cflap
      Aflap
      Rflap
      Pflap
      Eflap
      Tflap
      but its should be:
      Collectable
      Arcane colours
      Rocking the house
      Plated gold
      Endurance
      Tight

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  2. Anonymous26/2/14 10:07

    Hi Doga
    Your poem is awesome. As Daniel said it is too easy.You can make it better by using
    more interesting words and write some more lines.If you could make a poem on bees what would it look like?
    Thanks for writing this post.
    James V.

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    1. Anonymous28/2/14 14:23

      Hi JamesV
      I would write... I am yellow and black I have a stinging back I have wings to fly I suck my honey from flowers. My name is :Buzz

      From doga&Iris&Aryana

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  3. Anonymous28/2/14 09:37

    Hi Doga
    I like your poem. Every thing you said in the poem is true I know becouse I havea cat. But I know cat do more then what you have written in your poen. For example: I can balance on any fence, I can jump higher then your fridge or this I use my tongue to drink water. But I'm not saying it's bad its good I'm just trying to give edvice for your poem.
    Adriel.R

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  4. Anonymous28/2/14 09:47

    I like this Poem alot as Daniel and James V said it is a bit easy.
    Instead of Nap you could of done sleep?

    Good Job!

    Daisy

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  5. Anonymous3/3/14 11:59

    I really like what you did there I really like cats i had about 9 in Bali Good job but you might have used I a little too much, do you have a cat and whats its name?

    Alex

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  6. Anonymous12/3/14 21:43

    Dear Doga,

    Nice poem.


    Sincerely, Ert

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