16 March, 2014

Cheetah by James V.

LI: To write a descriptive paragraph using as many writing tools  (similes, metaphors, etc.) as possible. 

I can run faster than a race car at full speed. When I pounce - whoosh, I bring the flaming burning African air with me. Race me if you dare! My spots are a blur as I blast through the desert like a rocket. 
Runners in a race want to be me!


Image Credit: Airwolfhound

2 comments:

  1. Dear James V,

    That poem is really descriptive! I had the pleasure of reading it. I love the way you used adjectives. It was awesome!

    Happy Blogging! 
    Esmé NISS Y5G 

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  2. Anonymous21/3/14 09:36

    Hello James V.

    We think your poem was great. You used some powerful sentence like. I can run faster than a race car at full speed. We think that is is very great and interesting poem.

    Was it hard trying to find a good word?

    Aryana and Lucy

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