20 November, 2009

Week in Review (English) 19 10 09

For several weeks we have been doing our Biographies and have been tested by the teacher by Taking notes of a family member (appearance, plans for the future, possessions etc.)
Then after we finished our notes we used them for our assessment and wrote our whole biography down.

Also we had another task where we had to pick anyone we knew and do some research about them, brainstorm, draft, edit/proofread, type in the computer and send it to Mr. L so he can put it up on the website!

Thanks M!


  1. I think you did a good job because you included examples of what you need to take notes on you described everything well, and the spelling is correct. But to improve I think on both paragraphs you could have wrote down who you did and if you think that the person you did was pacific and gave you lots of information. Also, for the first paragraph you could have written down if you think that you did good on the assessment and why.

  2. I think it is a good idea to put the , information that we use in , biographies . Also because when people , visit the website they can revise, what do we use in biographies, also us .

  3. I enjoyed in litracy writing a biography about Wayne Gretskey and my Dad